The following is a letter found at a certain bar in Manila and has been preserved in its original, unedited form.
To Marije,
I am not surprised or wonder why Dennis leave you why? What reason can you think about but you're very fat body. I thought before that Dennis only use me to his toy but sooner and later I'm realize that he really can't not beared or stomached to be with you anymore because at first, Dennis say he could not stand you're habit of making pakialam all his walks (lakad) and always calling to their house what he got home or this or that.
And then he say he get ashame to me either in school or in his family and then asking you to exercise you’re very very, very fat body. But you hate it. Thought you’re the most preetiest girls he knows about. What do you think you are “ Beautiful Girl” of Jose Mari Chan?
Even you are beautiful face ( to your think) you do not have the right to called me whatsoever or else difference name one time or the other for the real purposed to insults my personality because I’m never call you names either in the front of Dennis or in the backs of Dennis, but if you start already to calling me different name, I don’t have any other choice but to call you other different name to. Like you are a PIG, FAT, OBESSED, OVERWIGHT, AND UGLY SHAPE girl. Shame to you’re body that is to a BUDING.
You can’t not blame Dennis for exchanging you to me because I am the more sexier that you when you look to us in the mirror. I’m repeat again that you are like Lozada when she is a girl.
Love,
The sexiest Girl of D.M.
P.S.
You say that I’m the bad breathe but who is Dennis want to kissed. Me or you? And the final is me. There you go.
Reaction:
Everyone of us seems to hate reading this letter because of the grammar including the tenses and the redundancy, the words that the sender used and the meaning of the letter. The letter obviously shows insult, disrespect and pride of what she got and their relationships between Dennis. For me the only purpose of the sender to Marije is to insult and for Marije to know what's wrong to her physical appearance. I also noticed different mistakes such as the wrong used of tenses, grammar, choose of words, etc. Even she committed different mistakes in grammar, the receiver will surely get mad or maybe she will laugh at the letter.
Everyone of us seems to hate reading this letter because of the grammar including the tenses and the redundancy, the words that the sender used and the meaning of the letter. The letter obviously shows insult, disrespect and pride of what she got and their relationships between Dennis. For me the only purpose of the sender to Marije is to insult and for Marije to know what's wrong to her physical appearance. I also noticed different mistakes such as the wrong used of tenses, grammar, choose of words, etc. Even she committed different mistakes in grammar, the receiver will surely get mad or maybe she will laugh at the letter.
Revision:
To Marije,
I was not surprised why did Dennis leave you. The reason that I thought was because of your very fat body. before I thought that Dennis only use me for his toy but later on, I realized that he really could not be with you anymore because Dennis said that he did not want your attitude particularly whenever he is busy and your habit of calling him in his house about the things he did not want to talk about.
And then he said that he was ashamed to me in school and in his family. then he asked you to exercise your very fat body but you did not listen to him. Though you’re the preetiest girl he knows. What do you think you are, “ Beautiful Girl” of Jose Mari Chan?
I was not surprised why did Dennis leave you. The reason that I thought was because of your very fat body. before I thought that Dennis only use me for his toy but later on, I realized that he really could not be with you anymore because Dennis said that he did not want your attitude particularly whenever he is busy and your habit of calling him in his house about the things he did not want to talk about.
And then he said that he was ashamed to me in school and in his family. then he asked you to exercise your very fat body but you did not listen to him. Though you’re the preetiest girl he knows. What do you think you are, “ Beautiful Girl” of Jose Mari Chan?
Even you have beautiful face, you do not have the right to call me in different name just for you to insult my personality because I never call you in different name in front of Dennis or in the back of Dennis, but if you start to call me in different name, I don’t have choice but to call you in other names too, like you are a PIG, FAT, OBESE, OVERWEIGHT, AND UGLY SHAPE girl.
You cannot blame Dennis for choosing me because I am sexier than you when you look us in the mirror. I repeat that you are like Lozada when she is a girl.
Love,
The sexiest Girl of D.M.
P.S.
You said that I’m the bad girl but who do you think Dennis want to kiss with? You or me? And the answer is me. There you go.
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